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Old Apr 27, 2004, 8:24 AM   #1
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This is my second effort and I've really pushed the boat out with this one, I hope it shows.

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Is there anything I can improve?
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Old Apr 27, 2004, 8:39 AM   #2
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Old Apr 27, 2004, 8:48 AM   #3
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Is there anything I can improve?
I don't know--I'm in the dark.
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Old Apr 27, 2004, 10:34 AM   #4
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Mmm, what about trying to adjust levels to enhance depth a little bit ?
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Old Apr 27, 2004, 1:11 PM   #5
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the depth is really really bad. you should do something about that.
plus, I'd try using greyscale. gives the pic a better look I guess.
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well....there is WAY too much going on in this shot.....i think you should use a shallower DOF to focus on one subject.....



(lol nice one barbara....)
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Old Apr 27, 2004, 6:07 PM   #7
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Hmmmmm ... did she consent to doing that ? 8)
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