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Old Jun 30, 2003, 4:21 PM   #1
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How could I make this shot more attractive ? Any hint ?

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Old Jun 30, 2003, 7:44 PM   #2
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Everything seems to be pointing upwards, but once you reach the top of the building you have reached the top of the picture. The viewer is led to the top of the photograph, but there's no payoff. A little more sky in the top and a little less building on the sides may be what this picture needs. JMHO
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Old Jul 1, 2003, 2:27 AM   #3
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I think it's pretty good now already.
Only the crop is slightly off, showing less on the right than on the left.

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It's pretty good Sergio. Only thing I see - is the lines falling slightly agains the middle. It's the perspektive - and can be corrected in PS.
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Old Jul 1, 2003, 7:23 AM   #5
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Thanks to Frank and Klaus.

This image applies your suggestions.



I could not make further tricks cause the original shot has not been taken "exactly in the middle".

A special thank to Lauren , whose suggestions i completly agree with gave me the idea for a different photo that I will dedicate to her.
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