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Old Jan 15, 2007, 9:34 PM   #1
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I really need some fresh eyes on these pictures. Can you give me some tips?

I am really working on composition. What do you think?

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Old Jan 16, 2007, 4:01 AM   #2
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Firstly I would take a look at this post as it will show you how to get the shots in here rather than just the links http://www.stevesforums.com/forums/v...amp;forum_id=2(you will generally get some more replies doing this as people don't have to pop over to other sites to view the shots).

I really like the first picture, very natural and the b/w conversion works really well. There are no uncomfortable shadows or blown highlights so good work.

The 2nd shot does not do anything for me but I like the idea behind it and can't think what could be done to improve it (however I would say that is only me and my personal taste).

The 3rd shot has potential but I would consider the composition, possibly moving the subjects form the centre and also look at getting down to their level rather than shooting down at them.

As with the first I really like the 4th (I must be in a b/w mood today) but it really does convey what the memorial is there for. I'm not sure about the angle that this was taken at and think it would look better if it were straightened. I also like the shot that you have on your Flickr site just before it.

Looking forward to seeing more work as you do it.


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Old Jan 16, 2007, 11:53 PM   #3
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nice shot

has a very candid feel to it. im not sure about the angle though.

pp wise, i would prob pump a bit more contrast into the shot.

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