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Old Sep 23, 2008, 10:38 PM   #1
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Would love to hear your thoughts on this W/A capture.

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Old Sep 24, 2008, 3:12 AM   #2
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Its not something I would hang on my wall, but I like the red white and green lighting as well as the Spanish style architecture.
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Old Sep 24, 2008, 4:24 AM   #3
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It's an OK shot but nothing that gets me excited. It might be helped with a crop at the top to lose some of the background.

What I do like is the electric ducted fan SU27 (I think). Is she yours? Do you fly anything else?
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Old Sep 24, 2008, 6:47 AM   #4
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Now that door makes methink good wine and talk awaits for the one who passes through it:-) It mightrequire some distortion job and a bit pp so as to add a bit more appeal, though..

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Old Sep 24, 2008, 12:49 PM   #5
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Mmmm a suggestion, try the following if you have chance:

See the stairs? the steps are horizontal as your picture frame not? As it's the same alligned the viewer is quickly bored. Try to make a picture:

- with the same height

- but move more to the right....then the stairs are not horzontal but has a slight increase of height. Looking more exciting.
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Old Sep 30, 2008, 5:03 PM   #6
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I like the original a bit better because it is so mysterious.

Maybe try to decide whether you want to portal to be mysterious or inviting, come up with a back-story for it and then approach the shot again with this story going through your mind.

I don't have any back-stories going through my mind yet, but I think that is something I'd like to play with next.

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