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Old Nov 13, 2010, 9:57 PM   #1
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wondering what any of you would have done with this photo. the first is the original below it is what i did. Any suggestions would help. thank u
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Old Nov 14, 2010, 2:51 PM   #2
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For me I think I would have shot from a different angle, I find the metal support post a little distracting. Maybe clone it out and again from a personal point of view, I would like to see all of the man right down to his feet.
Cropping out the window display behind him was a good move.
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Old Nov 14, 2010, 4:20 PM   #3
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Hi. I think personally that you dit it justice by the B/W conversion, I think that gives a better feel for the piece than the color, which in my taste (the color) is distracting from the subject, plus it gives a different charactor to the players face. I might have just included the very tip of the horn in the shot to make it look more complete. I do like the shot, very real feel to it!

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Old Nov 16, 2010, 9:10 AM   #4
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Jenn.....I have to agree with gsiddorn about the back ground...Very un appealing..Especially the trash can...One of my pet peeves...I do a lot of beach weddings and family shoots and where we go, there are tons of blue trash cans
all up and down the beach, that get in my shots and I have to spend time editing
them out...Thats my pet peeve...Anyway...Again the back ground is the big problem here...Try a different angle or do one heck of an editing job...
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Old Nov 16, 2010, 9:29 AM   #5
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I don't think the trash can is so out of place in this picture. It sort of adds to the ambiance. The I-beam is a bit distracting, but doesn't look to be readily edited out, due to the sign it is partly covering. The B&W conversion is definitely better than color, for this shot, though I may have just desaturated to a faded appearance instead.

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