Three flash & PP model

[lomitamike]

I've been practicing shooting some modeling shots using a three flash setup (main, fill and hair).

I have also been spending longer then usual to process or correct photo's to my liking.

I would like to hear where you think I can make improvements either with the lighting or the processing.

It's a rather inexpensive simple collection of gear I'm using so I know there is room for improvement.

Thanks for your input.

exif - ISO 200, 45mm, f/5.6, 1/160, flashes set to; main 1/8, fill 1/32, hair 1/8.

[Calicajun]

Lighting looks right on, only changes would be for personal taste. Lowering the fill light for more shadow on one side of the face and body.

[lomitamike]

Originally Posted by Calicajun

Lighting looks right on, only changes would be for personal taste. Lowering the fill light for more shadow on one side of the face and body.

Thank you.

[musket]

I agree with what has been already said, it's all down to personal taste, more shadow would increase depth, or make the subject look slimmer.

So I tried with an edit to make the subject look different here.