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Old Nov 12, 2012, 5:40 AM   #1
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I call this Fall

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Old Nov 14, 2012, 9:59 AM   #2
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I think what you would do with this shot would be one of personal tastes. Since the bird seems to be the focus of the shot and is in silhouette, I'd change it to a black and white image. The tiny bits of brown leaves are a bit distracting from the subject. I also rotated it a bit as the angle of the top of the fence seemed to be pushing the bird down and away from the sky and out of the picture. (Of course if that was what you meant by "fall", don't rotate.)
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Old Nov 14, 2012, 11:12 AM   #3
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I find it difficult to determine the obejctive of this image..i.e. is it the bird, the chain link fence, etc? Also, I' not sure of the connection to "Fall". It would be good to have a strong central subject without distractions.
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Old Nov 15, 2012, 6:23 AM   #4
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too much of the picture is out of focus its very distracting, the angle of the fence, the links in the fence, i gotta say it does nothing for me
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