Different shots critic alot!

[Magnet]

Hi pals!!
These are some of my photos from Arabia...
Photos were by Sigma10-20 but I am not sure about the last one!!

A: A sunset between Baljurashi and Makhwah in Al-Baha -SA



B: Thee Ain Tour Village between Makhwah and Al-Baha -SA



C:Some photos from Rijal Alma Palace -Aseer- SA



Some farming equipments been used in the past,,,



Animals used to live in Rijal Alma..




Green places there..

[Wingman]

Nice use of the wide perspectives. #5 looks blurry (camera shake) and could use some white balance correction. Overall, I like the compositions.

Jehan

[Magnet]

Originally Posted by Wingman

Nice use of the wide perspectives. #5 looks blurry (camera shake) and could use some white balance correction. Overall, I like the compositions.

Jehan

Thanks alot for your great critic about my pics...
I made it before important date for me..I was in a rush..This was from the last ones!!
as well as it was my first pics..I'm still child in photo!!

[schmintan]

Theres a lot of photos there. Generally you will get better feedback if you just post one or two max photos. more than that and theres just too much to really concentrate and dig into.

first one is the winner for me. great view, great perspective, great timing, nice exposure.
My only critique, and its really only small, is:

- id give it a more wide angle crop, lose a little from the top and bottom, give it a much more wide angle sprawling vista type feel.

- increase the contrast in the rocks by a good bit. it took me a long time to learn this. the rocks look ok, but would look much better with more contrast, and if you printed this, they would just look completely washed out. if printing, go with a touch more contrast than you think you need.

-dodge & burn the clouds by the tiniest amount to bring out the max detail, without making them look fake. they look beautiful now, but i think you could pull a little more detail from them.

The rest of the photos just look like snaps to me, shaky, overexposed in places, quickly taken without much thought on composition. they may make great memories for you, which is awesome, but for someone who was not there, they dont say anything.

first one is a winner though. nice job.

[Magnet]

Originally Posted by schmintan

Theres a lot of photos there. Generally you will get better feedback if you just post one or two max photos. more than that and theres just too much to really concentrate and dig into.

first one is the winner for me. great view, great perspective, great timing, nice exposure.
My only critique, and its really only small, is:

- id give it a more wide angle crop, lose a little from the top and bottom, give it a much more wide angle sprawling vista type feel.

- increase the contrast in the rocks by a good bit. it took me a long time to learn this. the rocks look ok, but would look much better with more contrast, and if you printed this, they would just look completely washed out. if printing, go with a touch more contrast than you think you need.

some of my problems are due to lens..others are due to my weak knowledge about photoshop and others...thanks again and again pal

-dodge & burn the clouds by the tiniest amount to bring out the max detail, without making them look fake. they look beautiful now, but i think you could pull a little more detail from them.

The rest of the photos just look like snaps to me, shaky, overexposed in places, quickly taken without much thought on composition. they may make great memories for you, which is awesome, but for someone who was not there, they dont say anything.

first one is a winner though. nice job.

Thanks alot for your great lesson pal.. I need more to do, I need more to learn... I came to this forum to learn from you and all of my friends...I compare mine to others, I feel shame all the time..But I never stop...I learned a lot..like about this life and its beauty that I wasn't aware of...
Thanks ..I will do my best again and again pal....Really thanks alot pal..

[SharpShotGal]

Love the top shot.. and to say the place looks about like a ghost town not many people around there...?

[Magnet]

Originally Posted by SharpShotGal

Love the top shot.. and to say the place looks about like a ghost town not many people around there...?

Yes,these are small villages...families live together, strangers may marry from them and live there!!

Thanks for your great view!!

[Calicajun]

I like the first three shots, interesting subjects with nice composition.