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Old Sep 8, 2013, 4:29 PM   #1
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Default River Bandon joining the Sea

Took this from Charles Fort in Cork, showing the river bandon heading out to Sea.

It was a good sunny day, but with lots of rain clouds comming in giving a great sky. Took about 10 shots from various perspective but this worked best to my eye.

Used a ND Graduated filter to prevent the sky being blown out.
With regards to photoshop, increased contrast, vibrance, darkened the blacks, and brightened the light house a tiny amount to make it stand out.

Im almost ready to print, but would like to hear any constructive criticism anyone here might have.

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Old Sep 9, 2013, 7:15 AM   #2
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Very peaceful looking shot for the most part. Might try and lighten up the dark clouds. My first thought when looking at the picture, is it a sunny day or a rainy day. No sure if the mix works well in the shot.
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Love it! Very dynamic!

But as soon as you mentioned printing it . . . all of a sudden the water didn't seem straight. The water in the distance seems to be curved. Is that the way the sun is hitting it or the distortion of the lens?

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Love it! Very dynamic!

But as soon as you mentioned printing it . . . all of a sudden the water didn't seem straight. The water in the distance seems to be curved. Is that the way the sun is hthreng it or the distortion of the lens?

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It's neither. It's an optical illusion caused by the hill on the right being lower than the hill on the left of the water, making the water look curved. If you hold a ruller to it you will see it's actually flat. not sure thres anything I can do to make it more natural to the eye though, thIs how it was unfortunately.
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Yeah. It could be that.

Also maybe all the nice mix of leading lines. It really makes for a really dynamic flow in the image. Maybe its just my eyes being influenced by all those dynamic lines. <grin>

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