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Old Aug 14, 2005, 9:56 AM   #1
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Another photo with my new DMC FZ20.:arrow:
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Old Aug 14, 2005, 2:55 PM   #2
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Just my opinion, but there seems to be almost two shots here. The old watchtower in the back and the water seem to be competing for attention with the wall and benches. The lamp is also cut off in the upper right hand corner and is a tad distracting. The composition of the wall is nice though, the way it starts in the lower left, and continues through the frame ending just off center works great.
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Old Aug 15, 2005, 12:20 AM   #3
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i agree.. i think there is a shot here with the benches and the wall trailing off into the distance.. and then another shot of the castlre.. right now they are just competing with one another...
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