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Old Nov 17, 2005, 8:57 PM   #1
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Another scan from my collection taken back in the day with 35mm , Ok I notice now myself the box she is leaning on is tilted. But other than that what do you think?
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Old Nov 17, 2005, 10:13 PM   #2
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i can't say i'm crazy about either "tana" shots. the posing in both seem a bit forced/uncomfortable. they both seem very dated, which i know they are. there isn't a clear focal point here and your model needs to relax a bit. but don't dwell in the past, find yourself a model and get back in there! have you done any workshops in the area? the woodstock center for photography has some great ones.
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Old Nov 18, 2005, 12:02 AM   #3
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i think if the pedestal had been taller she could have relaxed into it a little bit.. now it seems like she has to bend down too far to be comfortable.. and her feet look a little weird since they are lost in the fabric.. but other than that, i like the facial expression and i like the lighting.. and she's got some nice legs..


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