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Old Feb 22, 2006, 10:28 PM   #1
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another canon fire photo here for you to critique.

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gallery, hop on over to www.pbase.com/mikej86/colonial

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Old Feb 23, 2006, 10:19 AM   #2
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Better photograph than last, but obviously something missing. Yip the fire blast. Why did you not past in layers the canon fire from the last one into this properly exposed shot? Leave off the smoke and you will have a good shot.
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Old Feb 24, 2006, 3:31 AM   #3
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In the first place, you've captured a very interesting moment. A moment in which nobody's expectation(positive or negative) has not met yet!(So I agree with LBoy here, that this photo being better than the last). I liked the the anxious look on the face of the canon firer's(I am not sure if that's the phrase)which reveal the potential energy of this scene and thus I'd prefer if his expression were more accentuated.He is the executer, after all! So I cropped off some extra spectators and repetetive parts of the background edifice, while trying to preserve the essential elements. I believe that there are members of this forum who would manage to attain the thing I intended to show.
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