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Old Apr 28, 2008, 6:20 PM   #1
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This was one of the few shots that was worth posting before the sun went down. The problem with some of these shows, is that they start so late in the evening. Let me know what you guys think.
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Old Apr 29, 2008, 4:14 PM   #2
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Good timing and nice facial expression. A couple comments:

1. Try increasing the saturation a bit to get the colors to 'pop' some more..

2. There seems to be a lot of dead space to the right, I'd adjust the crop to focus more on your daughter.

3. It actually seems a bit soft or washed out - not sure which - maybe a little levels adjustment and sharpening to make it a bit more crisp..

I hope you don't mind, but I've taken the liberty to make the suggested changes and here is what I came up with:



Keep up the good work!
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