this is a great pic. not sure about landscape on this shot but thts ok
Umm i thnk there is too much varience from darks to highlights. Very good sharpness and nice detai. Usually with portraits you want to use a softer shot.
I used photoshop to decrease highlights and increase shadow detail (especially in the hair, now ther is more detail there now). It also doesnt look as obvious with light sources.
I also softened certain parts of the skin but kept eyes, lips and nose sharp
hope you dont mind about the edit.
wat you think?