I like the framing/timing of the first shot. And exposure & WB look fine. But the focus is just off. I'm guessing back focused as the closest thing to being in-focus is the 21 on the defender's jersey.
Like the second shot - my suggestion there is: the player/coach is what's interesting the guys standing over him aren't. So that's a shot where you want to frame tightly on the coach to emphasise the emotion.
You're definitely going in the right direction with these shots.