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GHayes396 · Apr 4, 2005, 9:39 AM

Took this and a few more last week and was looking for suggestions on improving these kind of shots in the future. I like them but something just doesn't seem right. I've adjusted brightness and contrast and cloned out water droplets that were on the windhield. Any comments are appreciated!!

Thanks

Grady

clem · Apr 5, 2005, 10:42 AM

I like the shot,

style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #000000"Just cropped and did a layer adjustment > selective colour in PS

JakeTPegg · Apr 5, 2005, 10:46 AM

Hi Grady, the cloud formation is fantastic, the contrast etc. looks good from here. Perhaps a distracting thing for me is the "half" tree and sign, and just a liitle bit of telephone wires. My pennies worth of suggestion is to add more in the foreground as a full item, even though the clouds are the main attraction. I know that isn't always easy or possible with roads and rain and whatever else prevents the composition, but those are my feelings about this pic.

Regards

Jake

Apr 5, 2005, 10:42 AM	#2
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Apr 4, 2005, 9:39 AM	#1
GHayes396 Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 53	Took this and a few more last week and was looking for suggestions on improving these kind of shots in the future. I like them but something just doesn't seem right. I've adjusted brightness and contrast and cloned out water droplets that were on the windhield. Any comments are appreciated!! Thanks Grady

Apr 5, 2005, 10:46 AM	#3
JakeTPegg Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 1,767	Hi Grady, the cloud formation is fantastic, the contrast etc. looks good from here. Perhaps a distracting thing for me is the "half" tree and sign, and just a liitle bit of telephone wires. My pennies worth of suggestion is to add more in the foreground as a full item, even though the clouds are the main attraction. I know that isn't always easy or possible with roads and rain and whatever else prevents the composition, but those are my feelings about this pic. Regards Jake