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Old Mar 19, 2011, 6:01 PM   #1
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Here are the changes. There is not much I can do about the bush cause I want the whole mountain in the shot. It is a little out of focus but this was my first picture. And I had not had a tripod then


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Old Mar 19, 2011, 6:38 PM   #2
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Maybe I need 3-D glasses, since this doesn't look as sharp as it should. Vignetting in the corners and the bush are distracting. And, the big "watermark" needs to go...at least make it small and put it in a lower corner.
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I agree with Walter on this one even though the subject matter is very nice I would indeed tone down the watermark and put in a lower corner BUT the picture is a nice shot
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Thank you. I do agree. Thank you Walter
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Hope you don't mind, but I spent a minute making some adjustments that I think might improve your shot. Photoshop and Topaz Adjust. Working with the small size (for Web) image is, of course, limiting.
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It appears to me that the focus is on the water rather than the mountain. Is this the intent? Cause the reflection seems to be what I'm drawn to more than anything, and the ripples appear quite sharp.
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