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Old Jan 31, 2003, 6:01 PM   #1
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Default Sunset in Hawaii at 5000 ft., above the clouds.

This put a smile on our faces.

http://www.PhotoShare.co.nz/PhotoSha...clouds3267.jpg


Would appreciate criticism, feedback, rants...gotta learn. Thanks
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Old Feb 1, 2003, 2:44 AM   #2
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It's a fine shot, but you should try to remove the treetop in the upper right corner, it seems to disturb the final shot. I also would crop the photo a bit in the lower part - just to make it more harmonic.
The bottomline with photography is to have an eyecatcher (here its the moon/sun) and then let the eyecatcher lead your eyes to another place in the photograph. E.x a long road starting in the lower right corner running to the upper left corner, where the eye meets a house, dog ...something. But it's not always easy. The eyecatcher is it!
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Thanks Klaus, I wondered about that tree on the right myself. Will try some cropping. I appreciate your comments.
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