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My first attempt at senior pictures. Feel free to give me some pointers.
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shot 2
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Very nice set of portrait,.Love the diagnoal composition.
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Thanks! I had a lot of fun shooting these of my daughter. I'm not a professional but I thought I'd give it a whirl. We are having a hard time choosing which ones to print. We have well over a hundred to choose from.
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Your daughter is a lovely girl. The pictures are quite good. But, since you asked for criticism, let me offer the following: The first would be my favorite except that the white balance appears off on my monitor. It looks skewed to green. The second is too contrasty for my taste -- all the definition gets lost. Save that for when your daughter turns forty! On the third picture, I find the position of the top rail distracting. It makes me think of Steve Martin with the arrow. I prefer the fifth to the fourth because the cropping is closer. All in all, they are a pleasing set of images. My comments are just a few things that would make them even better by my lights.
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Thanks for your advise. Any input will help me improve my shots.
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beautiful girl,nice shots!
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