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Old Nov 8, 2005, 1:11 PM   #1
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consider this a newbie intro :-)
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Old Nov 8, 2005, 4:56 PM   #2
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Looks ok. but it is a bit too grainy.
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Old Nov 8, 2005, 5:06 PM   #3
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Nice try really,

like the furniture and white colors,

andthe blurring is OK to be somewhere, butin global too much of blur, she should be much more sharp,

as for the romantic, her right hand doesn't go in that way I think it should be a differently shown,

The shoot should be made a little more from your left side as her face and body is a little too much covered from that angle

Really like the try and the point,

hope to see some other shots

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Old Nov 9, 2005, 2:05 AM   #4
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thanks for the commentary guys.

yes, too much blur in general, and I probably shouldn't have blurred so much on her.

I see what you mean about her hand.

In terms of the angle, the room is cramped so I would have had to use a wider angle lens to move more left, which I tried but which didn't give me pleasing results.




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