Those photographs are all great. I really like the one Of the store. The 24/120 Lens is getting a bad rap for no reason I can see. I have the old non-"VR" and I have this "VR" I now use for everything I do. I can find no fault with either of these Len's.The "VR" is only better in bad lighting situations. Both of My 24/120's are sharp and crisp.
As usual, I think the people that don't have anything good to say about these len's just don't own one. If they did , They would love it like We do.
I just did 147 pictures of kids at My Church for Holloween and every one is just perfect. I did use a travelight 750 along with My SB-28DX though. Here is a sample!!!