Please take a look

[Jo52]

Hey,
I have put some pictures online and it would be nice to have some comments -good or bad- and maybe some tips what to do diffrent.

Here's the link:
:arrow: http://www.webphotoforum.com/artist.asp?aID=2188

I already put the link on Dpreview, but I don't get any response.
Are they THAT bad?


--- sorry for my English, I speak dutch :roll: ---

[mrtoad]

I like grasshopper and leaf the best.

[fenlander]

Jo,

Your pictures show that you are looking for unusual shapes, textures and details. Keep taking lots of pictures and developing your ability to find the interesting - and personal - details in the things you photograph.

fenlander

[xf20]

Well, Spinner's photo doesnt seem very good!

Besise the photo of the cat and the leaf, your pics are interesting!
Little details!

Cumpx

[selvin]

Because of the small size of your photos, it is dfficult to generate more than just general comments given the lack of detail. However, the grasshopper is technically okay but does not grab the veiwers interest.

Partly because the grasshopper is visible from the least interesting angle, his back. Showing his face or an outline would have considerably made this more than an interesting photo.

The cat picture is really too muted in its colors unless you were trying to create a mood. In that case, the cat should be looking more towards us to be more interesting.

Hope this helps.

[selvin]

Because of the small size of your photos, it is dfficult to generate more than just general comments given the lack of detail. However, the grasshopper is technically okay but does not grab the veiwers interest.

Partly because the grasshopper is visible from the least interesting angle, his back. Showing his face or an outline would have considerably made this more than an interesting photo.

The cat picture is really too muted in its colors unless you were trying to create a mood. In that case, the cat should be looking more towards us to be more interesting.

Hope this helps.

[selvin]

Because of the small size of your photos, it is dfficult to generate more than just general comments given the lack of detail. However, the grasshopper is technically okay but does not grab the veiwers interest.

Partly because the grasshopper is visible from the least interesting angle, his back. Showing his face or an outline would have considerably made this more than an interesting photo.

The cat picture is really too muted in its colors unless you were trying to create a mood. In that case, the cat should be looking more towards us to be more interesting.

Hope this helps.

[selvin]

Sorry about the triplicate but my computer coughed during the e-mail transmission and decided to go bonkers.

[Jo52]

thanx a lot for the replies.