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FITCIP Jan 18, 2012 5:53 PM

close up b&w
 
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hi all,
this is a close up i took of my son harvey the other day.
i wanted to put it in the critique section to see what is right and wrong about it. the reason i didnt post it in "critique" was i didnt need harsh judgement of it as a piece of photographic artwork, merely just wanting to know if it looks like i used the right settings to capture a good clear image of him. the moody look is on demand, he's only 5 and considers himself somewhat of a model lol

any advice is appreciated,
thanks, john

catalex54 Jan 19, 2012 2:02 AM

Congratulations John, you have a beautiful son and the close-up is very expressive and crisp, the B & W makes it very well. Harvey in the future could be an actor ;)

FITCIP Jan 19, 2012 6:21 AM

as always catalex, you are very kind and complimentary. thank you. he's such a little poser, im sure he'll use it to his advantage in life one day lol

eysha Jan 19, 2012 6:33 AM

nice clear shot and such a gorgeous boy too. I must try b/w sometime.

MartinSykes Jan 19, 2012 9:02 AM

Maybe just needed a bit of +ev - his light skin and the light background probably confused the metering a bit so it's come out a bit dark - the whites of the eyes are quite grey.

saly Jan 19, 2012 9:13 AM

I think it came out very nice, a very handsome young man!

One suggestion, when you use flash, it casts a strong shadow on the wall behind the subjects, it will probably look better if he stood further away from the wall.

jjdog2 Jan 19, 2012 1:03 PM

Very nice John, some good suggestions posted.

jj

FITCIP Jan 20, 2012 11:54 AM

thank you guys for your lovely comments. he of course inherited his looks from me ;)

also thank you martin, i'll be trying a similar shot using the flash diffuser and following your suggestions. results will follow at the weekend when harvey is off school lol

regards,
john

catalex54 Jan 20, 2012 12:22 PM

Dear John I reproduce here if you do not offend your beautiful image with a slight pp.

Deserves it! :)

http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/692...arveyclose.jpg

FITCIP Jan 20, 2012 4:24 PM

looks great catalex, always feel free to add your creativity to my work. you know your pp better than i do by a long shot and you have improved my boy's image completely. many thanks

john


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