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Crashman wrote:
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![]() We tried the tripod at different heights but didn't get it right, I think I do have something like you suggested in one of the later posts above. Thank you very much for the constructive criticism, I need to learn how to do portraits. Ira |
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I'm home sick today so may look at my comments tomorrow and wonder who wrote them.
I know this is probably something trivial, but why doesn't he have shoes on in the first shot? Since he seems so self conscious of being photographed (you can really see it in the two you posted), maybe having him be doing something when you photograph him. I'm by no means a portrait photographer, but for a class I was taking this summer, my best shots were after the photoshoot when they were getting out of position and playing around. Just my amateur view. Patty |
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Hi Ira,
From the 3, I like "strong square (Large).jpg". One thing about that one is the position of the eyes, if he likes to look up, then maybe you could try shooting at a higher level, or photoshop also works fine ![]() One final thing is that I notice the camera is on the ground. Personally since the camera is a the main tool, I would shots of him holding it etc... It must be really hard for a photographer to turn into model/subject. I can totally understand how some of the shots look uncomfortable, cuase really, I don;t think I would be that comfy either! Thanh |
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personally i like the first shot
maybe i can relate e o no shoes and casual ![]() the monotone colours makes the red on the strap stand out which takes your eye to the C word my 2 bobs worth |
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