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Old Nov 11, 2012, 4:11 AM   #1
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These girls are waiting to enter a weight lifting competition, How could it be improved?
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Old Nov 11, 2012, 5:38 AM   #2
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It's a hard one to improve as it's a shot of people stood waiting with not too much else going on. I would have brougth the focus in on the girl in the middle as she has the strongest expression. It looks like you shot with a superzoom or similar so you can't really isolate the background which would also have helped.
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Old Nov 13, 2012, 4:31 AM   #3
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Hard to critique as I'm guessing you shot what was intended- a few girls waiting.
As Mark suggested, a shallow DOF would be nice, but much of that is dependant on your equipment.
On the shot itself I'd have added a stronger contrast with some selective burning and/or levels adjust and a slight colour balance shift to warm up the image. I Like the shot though...
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