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Old Sep 3, 2006, 1:58 PM   #1
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Just went out to try my new flash and with the bateries problem I made only one shot beeing solid but decided to add a different look to this photo.

Photo was made in the evening with flash and all comments or critiques are welcome...

grain was added in PSD.

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Old Sep 3, 2006, 4:36 PM   #2
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Her pose is a bit akward with the bottom half of her body (waist down) seemingly disconnected from her top half. In addition the upward angle tends to givean overemphasis of her crotch area. I suspect that was not your original intent.

I personally would have preferred her looking a bit more towards you in this pose.

The flash has targeted the closest rock in the middle foreground and has it overxposed so that it distracts from her.

She's beautiful and her face is a treasure. Personally then I would have given her face more attention.

Hope this helps.
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