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Old Nov 27, 2006, 11:16 AM   #1
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Hi,

Well Robin your Arrow is very goods pointed :?

your shoots are very very well done...

First two are great, specially I like the second onje because of the colors which are great.... but first composition and model performance is better, Well I do not say that conversion is wrong but in this case I prefer the color version....great work..



but the third is not so attractive to me..

Thanks for sharring.
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Thanks Zakd, appreciate your comments
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I think shot 3 speaks more to the subject matter. students going away to uni, the look in 3 feels more student and journey combined. Maybe the same pose as image 1 but with the model/clothing and baggage of image 3
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shots 1 and 3 work nicely for me


Love the tone chosen on shot 1. Also great composition

i dont really like the models position in shot 2. Seems to put me off the shot

Shot 3 is also very nice. Again nice mono conversion and effective composition.

great work

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Old Nov 27, 2006, 11:50 PM   #8
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creeduck, ken thanks for looking and commenting
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Old Nov 28, 2006, 10:26 AM   #9
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Wow - nice models! I like the shots too (though don't personally care for sepia tone). Second one is my fav. :-)
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