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Old Jul 21, 2003, 1:43 PM   #1
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Old Jul 23, 2003, 4:27 PM   #2
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Shots are good and i like the idea behind them, however, IMHO, something more could help making them much more attractive.

The first one.
You ( you ?) are looking right in front of you. However your face is exactly in the middle of the composition. It's static.
I think changing the composition in such a way that the head is in the first third part of the shot leaving a big 66% sky and horizon in front of your glasses will dramatically change the impact of the photo.You will be looking far away towards the horizon ....

The second one.
Nice composition, however, well , I think you already know what's wrong.
Yes, men shoulders shouldn't be there ! They should'nt exist at all !
A similar case of "unwanted naked men in the background" occured in the recent post "A picture of my gf" : http://www.stevesforums.com/phpBB2/v...ic.php?t=11942
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Old Jul 23, 2003, 4:46 PM   #3
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thanks for the input...

and its not me, its my stepbrothers .

and yes.. the shoulders were a minor catastrophy..
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