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Old Aug 5, 2003, 10:40 PM   #1
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Default My Niece again

Hi - I took this one of my niece the day before her 5th b-day. What do you think?

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Old Aug 5, 2003, 10:47 PM   #2
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Hi Yitz,
The framing (where you've placed her in the composition) and use of negative space and cropping all work. Unfortunately she is out of focus. Most noticeable in her hair on her right, but also soft around her eyes, the feature we humans are most drawn to when viewing other live creatures. She's a beautiful model with a spontaneous expression. You don't include your technical data so I don't know if a slow shutter speed or camera shake was was the culprit. Try again to obtain a result with sharper focus, at least at her eyes.
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Old Aug 5, 2003, 11:19 PM   #3
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Default Slow Shutter speed....

yes - the shutter speed was slow... and she was jumping around.

it's too bad that she wasn't so much in focus. here is the original file pre-photoshop.



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