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Old Aug 4, 2008, 1:37 PM   #11
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Very good stuff. Excellent model.

You are going to have a tough time with a plain white shirt and a dark model like that. Trying to turn her brightness up could result in washing out the shirt. Trying to get the texture of the shirt could result in underexposing her skin, and especially her hair.

Also, in the first shot, her legs seem to be a darker tone than her face. Probably just shading, but I noticed it right off.

I would say, when shooting her, bring a bit more light to the subject. Also, she has beautiful teeth, but she need not give a huge smile in each shot. Try different expressions, particularly some that are a little softer.

But, definitely, keep shooting! Looking forward to seeing more.
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Old Aug 6, 2008, 10:42 AM   #12
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thank you, i will try some different shots and poses.

Keep the feedback coming, as soon as computer is back to 100% i will post some more photos. ecap
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Old Aug 14, 2008, 4:04 AM   #13
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A simple autofix in PSE 6 fixes the lack of brightness/contrast. Two secs to improve.

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Ps fabulous looking model!
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Old Aug 21, 2008, 9:44 PM   #14
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stunning model. i made a few adjustments on this one shot, let me know what you think.
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Old Aug 21, 2008, 9:49 PM   #15
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i'll see if it works this time.
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Old Aug 22, 2008, 7:35 AM   #16
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looks good, thanks for the edit.

just got the computer back up and running so will post some as soon as i get a free moment to take some more.

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Old Sep 2, 2008, 11:48 PM   #17
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I liked the first shot but it has a washed out look. Hope you don't mind but I had a go at boosting saturation and adjusting levels and a bit of noise removal. I know that the monitor you're viewing on can also make a difference but this worked for me

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Old Sep 4, 2008, 4:21 PM   #18
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thank you for the edit feel free anytime to edit my stuff, i am always open to improvement. ecap
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Old Sep 6, 2008, 3:44 AM   #19
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Really good shots beautiful model also, i agree with the others on adding shadow and highlights
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Old Oct 22, 2008, 4:25 PM   #20
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I really love the first one, these images seem to tell a story



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