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Old May 13, 2010, 10:36 PM   #1
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Default My beautiful friend Kayla

Hello all,
My friend asked me to take her pictures after graduating college, so here's the first batch.

Not much was changed in Photoshop except a little color adjustment and sharpening of the eyes

Please let me know what you think and if anything could be changed

#4 is my personal favorite

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Old May 14, 2010, 12:34 AM   #2
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cute glamor shots.
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Old May 14, 2010, 11:49 AM   #3
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I love the pose and dof in the last pick. Very nice. Can i play with it?
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Old May 14, 2010, 12:32 PM   #4
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Ordo, Feel free to make edits to the photos. I would love the feedback and see what else could be done
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Old May 14, 2010, 12:45 PM   #5
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How do you like this?

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This one with less green (i turned green the cardigan to balance the purple shirt):


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I like the second edit best, what steps did you use to edit the photo? Was photoshop used? Thanks
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PS8. Changed some levels, changed the grey on the cardigan, selectively lighted the face, denoised with neat image plug-in and re sharpened.
Still not satisfied with the color balance, skin is not ok and could be greatly improved, but well... it was a quick edit.
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Thank you for the tips though, i'll give it a shot tonight to see if i can duplicate or improve it at all. Thanks again!
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Found some more minutes to try. Color artifacts on the cardigan but a better skin i guess.

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