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Old Mar 25, 2004, 10:40 AM   #1
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With simple light, one 420EX and one Metz flash with difusser.











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These are first time models (and a unexperienced photographer) so be gentle.

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Old Mar 25, 2004, 11:29 AM   #2
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Frank, you've moved from one wildlife form to another and handled the transition well. Well done.
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Old Mar 25, 2004, 4:22 PM   #3
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Thanks so much, but I have a lot to learn .

Here are some more from that shoot.







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Old Mar 25, 2004, 6:06 PM   #4
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I like the second shot the best, it really draws you in. The only thing that might improve it is to "tame down" the face of her wrist watch ,it is a little distracting to me. All your models are beautiful.
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I agree on the watch and will pay close attention to that in the future.

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Old Mar 26, 2004, 12:35 AM   #6
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Frank, lovely models, lovely shots.

This comment may have more to say about my screen than your shots. The faces seemed a teensy bit too bright.. - dtails haven't been lost or anything like that but when viewed against the background a smidge less light...

Please remember that maybe an artifact of my aging LCD and eyes...
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Old Mar 26, 2004, 1:02 AM   #7
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Hi,
Especially the last one is bright, this is done as compensation for the umbrella, in other words, look the sun is comming through .

They indeed were beautiful before the camera, after about an hour they really came loose and it worked out real well.

I think I'll be seeing them over again.

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Old Mar 26, 2004, 6:04 AM   #8
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Hi Frank...

I am awestruck by the quality of your first time efforts to
shoot modeling photos...

I especially like the one with your whimsical model with the umbrella looking upward

Well done!
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Old Mar 26, 2004, 6:42 AM   #9
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Good job Frank!

My only comment is that some of the shadows behind them are a little hard. I realize it's tough with a single flash... Perhaps some type of reflector to soften them... or perhaps move the models farther away from the "wall"...
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Old Mar 26, 2004, 11:18 AM   #10
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Working on it, next time it will be better ;D.
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