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Old Apr 15, 2004, 4:36 PM   #1
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She is very young and that explains the baby-fat!!!

What do you guys think of this pic?? Give me better ideas please.

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Old Apr 15, 2004, 7:05 PM   #2
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Don't apologize for this young lady. She is very beautiful. Just first impressions, but I like this portrait.
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Old Apr 16, 2004, 2:22 AM   #3
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Really nice,
I'm just a beginner myself so don't take my advise to harsh .

Try to get some more color in her face.
The lips are somewhat dry looking, maybe use some sort of gloss or lipstick on them.
Get the index finger down.

The stupid thing is these faults I make myself time after time and only see them afterwards.

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Old Apr 16, 2004, 3:06 AM   #4
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I really like the girl, and I absolutly love the pose... But i dont like the table in the shoot... :P
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Old Apr 16, 2004, 3:32 AM   #5
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Default What do you think now Frank???

Frank, I have corrected the finger in Photoshop and at the same time darkened her lips a bit.. do you think its better now??

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Old Apr 16, 2004, 3:40 AM   #6
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Default Jedi... What do you think now?

I have removed the table with the help of Photoshop. Does it look better now?

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Old Apr 16, 2004, 5:19 AM   #7
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With or without baby fat, she is beautiful! Photo without the table looks better. I'm surely not highly competent as others to give you suggestions but only thing I notice is somehow too much light on her face.
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Old Apr 16, 2004, 8:37 AM   #8
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Hi,
Much beter but there is indeed still too much light on the face, but don't worry that can be personal.

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Old Apr 16, 2004, 11:10 AM   #9
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I concur with Frank about softening the light. The girl is beautiful.
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Old Apr 16, 2004, 5:46 PM   #10
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Here is another photograph of the same girl... a side pose. I know its a bit over exopsed, but that's my preference - I like my photographs 1/2 to 1 stop over exposed!!!!!!!

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