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Old May 23, 2004, 8:27 AM   #1
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Ok,
This is my VERY first more daring shoot, so please be gentle with comments.















I'm curious what you think.

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Old May 23, 2004, 10:46 AM   #2
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Good job Doorhof.

It is my personal opinion ... okay???.... Light in photos 4, 6and 7 is bluish in color, thus gives very cold effect. I would have prefered warmer tones, specially doing nudes or semi nudes. I think it gives a totally different mood to the photographs. What do you think??

Naughty look in photo # 4 is interesting - it says a lot!! Rest are good too.
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Old May 23, 2004, 12:30 PM   #3
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I agree with vehra here. Blue seems quite cold for these kind of shoots.

And she is also quite pale in her skin so a warmer tone in lighting would be preferable, at least for me.

She also doesnt seem to like the situation, a more relaxing look or perhaps her not looking directly in to the camera could do the trick.

but of course it is great photos! Keep em coming. You're doing great
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Old May 23, 2004, 3:57 PM   #4
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Hi,
These are actualy the snapshots for the session comming this week .
This session was cut off way to soon so she is coming back.

The blueish tint is indeed something I'm struggling with sometimes, but I'm working on it.

I don't understand the remark that she is not liking it ??

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Hi,
These are actualy the snapshots for the session comming this week .
This session was cut off way to soon so she is coming back.

The blueish tint is indeed something I'm struggling with sometimes, but I'm working on it.

I don't understand the remark that she is not liking it ??

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It could be that I am the only one who thinks so. But I feel that her face expression sometimes is a bit too relaxed. Perhaps I am way off. But I feel that the photo would benefit if she did not look straight in to the camera lense, a look that is a bit off from the lense is more suitable for that kind of face expression.

But that could be just me and my strange perception . It was just something that i felt when I saw the pictures.

But I feel that a look straight in to the camera demands ALOT from the one being photographed because she then makes contact with the "beholder", that's why we have supermodels I guess.

Your photography is at a very high level, that's why I am "picky", if you know what I mean. . Take it as constructive criticism. Just want to empasize that, although I am sure that you understand that already.
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Old May 23, 2004, 6:55 PM   #6
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They are all nice except the third shot. I dont mean to be rude but she really needs to wax down there a bit better as the shadow of where the hair was is noticeable, or perhaps you can get that out inphotoshop. I like all the others, great shots on the whole:-)
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