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Old Jul 21, 2004, 1:11 PM   #1
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Agfa Slide Film 100 ASA

Only digital adjustment was deleting scratchs and dust from the scanning process.

I´ve used coloured lights.

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Old Jul 21, 2004, 6:25 PM   #2
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Okay firstly don't forget that this is coming from an amateur. I'm just going on what I've learnt from looking at lots of this type of photography and learning from people on forums such as this one...

The first one has way too much space above the head.In both the first and third, the model looks kinda awkward (sp?).... Looks like her shoulder is dislocated or something. I think I like everything about the middle one though. The lighting seems effective and the cropping is great. Her expression is nice too... Keep at it! You're doing better than me:shock:
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Old Jul 21, 2004, 8:45 PM   #3
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Maybe its just the resizing but the images are a little soft. The middle one is better but the others are a bit on the soft side.
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Old Jul 21, 2004, 9:30 PM   #4
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sorry... I forgot this information..

The pics is over exposed by 1 and the film was developed +1 too.

The white space at first pic was because 2 thing... intentionally i leftsome space (not that much).. and 2nd it was a borrowed camera that i used for first time. So i hasnt enough feeling with camera yet.

I dont understand about the soft you say. I f you want I can post a croped section from the full size 20x30cm scann (300dpi) (WOW 39Mb BMP FILE!!!!)

I ask her (on first and third pics) to pose like ´20s or ´30s divas. :|
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Old Jul 23, 2004, 1:46 AM   #5
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The second one is superb, I love that one.

On the first and third I have problems with the pose, especially the shoulder looks very unnatural.

If you want to mimic a look try to use an example from that pose in print and let the model study it, that will make it a lot easier.

Sometimes while shooting I think a pose is perfect only to find out afterwarts is looks really awkworth.


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Old Jul 23, 2004, 2:02 AM   #6
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If you want to mimic a look try to use an example from that pose in print and let the model study it, that will make it a lot easier.

I did!!!
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Could you please post the original.
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Old Jul 23, 2004, 1:48 PM   #8
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what original?

The 39mb one? or the pic that i showed to the model?
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The original pose you used.
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Old Jul 23, 2004, 3:07 PM   #10
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The model was in one of my teacher´s book... i really cant remember the tittle... something about the 70´s :O
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