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Old Apr 29, 2005, 7:35 AM   #1
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Old Apr 30, 2005, 6:40 AM   #2
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hi, i like the concept, but i feel there is too much uninteresting space, like the rock and the tree behind it. Maybe a crop like this?

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Old Apr 30, 2005, 7:32 AM   #3
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I would go a little further Clem and crop right in to the rock on the left. I would also clone out the distracting Pale Goldenrod colour (that's what WhatColor tells me it is :?),on her bottom lip.

I didan edit to show, but realized we're not in the critiques forum, so although you didn't ask, I hope you don't mind an opinion HeZe. If you would rather, I will take it away again. If a Mod is not happy, then i'm sure Jim will take it away himself and slap my wrist :-).

Nice Picture overall though .


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Old Apr 30, 2005, 7:36 AM   #4
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I didn't realize we weren't supposed to critique outside the technique critique forum. My Appologies. It's all done in good faith

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Old Apr 30, 2005, 7:55 AM   #5
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Clem, there doesn't appear to be any hard-fast written rules for this forum I think what we are doing is fine, so long as the OP has asked for opinions or help. I just forgot where I was and followed your lead. Your fault :blah:'

The Critiques & Techniques Forum was set up specifically for just that. If you post a pic there you have to expect something being said or done, but anywhere else It's usually best to wait until asked .

Once again if HeZe would rather...................no problem.

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I think critiques should always be accepted by the author as it gives them something to ponder. Your crop is a perfect example of trying to help, and doing it well. Having said this, the author of the topic should always have the rights to delete others attemps.
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