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Old Aug 31, 2005, 9:45 PM   #1
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Old Sep 2, 2005, 5:16 PM   #2
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First that i notice is that picturewas*crop* to much. Second, her unhappy face has no attraction to viewers, maybe try another feeling.

Could be that something missing with the contrast or with lightbut i leave to the experts to suggest that point.

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Old Sep 3, 2005, 9:01 AM   #3
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First that i notice is that picturewas*crop* to much. Second, her unhappy face has no attraction to viewers, maybe try another feeling.

Could be that something missing with the contrast or with lightbut i leave to the experts to suggest that point.

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First , The picture is not crop

Second , is unhappy faceis what we want

For the rest I dont know




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Old Sep 3, 2005, 11:05 AM   #4
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Lighting seems a little dull and her right eye seems to be in the dark, She has nice eyes so I would attempt to bring them out a little more. the position and face expression appears to make her look not so feminine as it makes her neck look thick, have you tried to photograph her from the other side? maybe that is her more photographic side of her face.
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Old Sep 3, 2005, 10:23 PM   #5
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I like the expression on her face, although I'm not a fan of the hair in the eyes, I'd like to see the eyes a bit more. I'd also like a bit more light on her. She's a pretty model, I'd like to see you do more with her. Actually if you light her up just a bit more, the hair over her eyes might cease to become as much of an issue for me.
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Old Sep 14, 2005, 1:15 PM   #6
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Hi Pierre,

I really thought this image really had potential...I hope you don't mind this enhancement. She's a great looking model... :-)


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Old Sep 14, 2005, 1:31 PM   #7
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Yes, this is a winner changingsand big differance. The contrast between blue eyes and skin color is important changing. Second the change of skin color make her much open for viewing and uniforming the colors on her skin is something that makes this picture special.

Now I see this picture with different eyes...I like this improvements and please receive my congratulations...



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Old Sep 14, 2005, 6:40 PM   #8
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I really thought this image really had potential...I hope you don't mind this enhancement. She's a great looking model... :-)





you did great

What did you did??

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Old Sep 15, 2005, 1:36 AM   #9
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Hi Pierre,

I ran a levels adjustment and reduced the red color by using a selective color adjustment. I also intensified the color of her eyes a bit with a selective color adjustment. I then applied sharpening to her eyes only. I'm glad you like it!
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Old Sep 15, 2005, 3:30 AM   #10
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Love the rework.

The shot is NOT cropped incorrectly, if you like it is personal .
Unhappy faces are not shown often, I think it's daring to do so.

Good shot.

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