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Old Sep 19, 2005, 11:47 PM   #1
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Haven't shot much lately...so I'm trying to work back into it.

Model is Danielle & more of her can be seen at: http://www.modelmayhem.com/member.php?id=29527
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Old Sep 20, 2005, 1:27 AM   #2
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wasn't sure what kind of shot i was going to see when i read the title, but hey, it made me look... hehe...


anways, the eyes are exceptional in this shot.. the only problem i have is the feather that partly covers her right eye.. wish that was over just at tad.. the skin looks nice.. and the "costume" is original..
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Old Sep 20, 2005, 1:38 AM   #3
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Very nice
I would use curves to get the blacks a bit darker and clone the top part also with the feathers, although that's personal offcourse.
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Old Sep 20, 2005, 2:16 AM   #4
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i agree, i think filling the corner with the flowers would help as well..
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Old Sep 20, 2005, 2:27 PM   #5
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Tried some of your ideas...better?
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Old Sep 20, 2005, 3:59 PM   #6
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One more......
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Old Sep 20, 2005, 6:17 PM   #7
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i really like the edit.. emphasizes the face better and is more symmetrical.. nice shot..

i like the orange shot as well.. the pose is good and the smirkish smile is great.. the eyes seem a tad softer than the other pic, is this processing?
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Not really processed that much differently. I generally follow the same RAW post workflow. I think the difference is cause by the varied lighting contrast around her face (even her pupils reacted to the light differently).
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Old Sep 21, 2005, 1:44 AM   #9
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yea, they sure did.. her eyes are just striking..
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Old Sep 21, 2005, 2:41 AM   #10
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Second one also very lovely
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