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Old Sep 28, 2005, 11:38 AM   #1
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After posting the first 3 of all, as I promised here are additional 4 to complete the first session.

Just to remind that for the photos in first topic also with the photos in this topic the same problem appeared which is the bad under-eyes make-up and I did not manage to overstep...I mean unfortunate it is posible to see a color diference on her face after photoshop treatment.

Hope to have more comments and critiques as well.

Well, if our friend Mr. Frank show another session of playmate this ones will not be interesting.......:blah:it was a joke sorry..........:evil:

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Old Sep 28, 2005, 11:47 AM   #2
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I like this one also................but still #1 is the best one...so I think
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Old Sep 28, 2005, 12:08 PM   #3
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Whatwas shethinking.................
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Old Sep 28, 2005, 12:54 PM   #4
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The last one (4th) is not like I want to be but I want to see your comments.

Hope to see you among the replies..........

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sorry for all of the photo size............:sad:
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Old Sep 28, 2005, 5:19 PM   #5
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Very nice series, gorgeous girl...my favorite is the first one. I like the expression, lighting, and shadows. Best regards,

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Quick edit...Using the skin tone in the first pic as a reference makes me think the light source was a bit overpowering in the rest of them. A few shadows really compliments her face, and highlights her expression more.
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Old Sep 28, 2005, 10:29 PM   #6
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Nice series, Zak. I agree with Kenneth in that the first photo is my favorite. The use of lighting highlights the features of her face in addition to creating more character. If I were to suggest any changes, I would prefer to see a little less make-up. She's beautiful enough and the over use of make-up can detract from that.


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Old Sep 28, 2005, 11:04 PM   #7
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This is a photo-sharing forum... but since you seem to be asking for resolution to a problem you have identified with the photos (while requesting critiques too), I think the images should be posted in the Critiques & Techniques Forum, rather than this one.

While I do have some (possibly) helpful things I would recommend, I don't want to do so in this forum. It seems that all of the forums are slowly being used for critique requests (instead of everyone using that specific forum for that purpose).
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Wow...I'm so used to bouncing betweem forums, protocol escapes me sometimes. Mea culpa...best regards, (what exactly is a mea culpa anyway?) (Fessing up? I hope?)

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Just looked at number one again, and must say I really like it.

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The lighting in number 1 is the best IMO but a bit dark to where any detail is muddied out.

The lighting in the remaining shots looks like direct flash from a camera mounted flash or built in flash. Those same shots with a bounced flash would turn out much better. If its a built in flash or camera mounted flash where the flash head cannot be tilted then diffuse the light by holding a coffee filter in front of it.

If you get another chance try a different lighting technique as I think these had good potential.
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