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Old Dec 8, 2005, 10:04 AM   #1
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From my latest shoot. Camera: Canon Rebel XT. Lenses: Outside - Canon 70-300 IS USM, Canon 28-105 3.5-4.5. Inside - Canon 50 1.8, Canon 85 1.8, and Canon 28-105

You can see all her shots here: http://imageevent.com/24peter/lorenafinato

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Old Dec 8, 2005, 4:03 PM   #2
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Hi Peter, always happy to see some others showing model photos.
You have great camera and I see lot of lenses...good.

#1Like her smile and face it natural. Some color adjustments should be done in photoshop also theskin treatment
#2 the background is excellent,like it very much but same for the colors
#3 this one is not good for me
#4 this one I like verymuch, like her pose and expression...interesting
#5a little too softon
#6 like the color contrastand the white color is good
#7 don't know what to say about this one
#8 This is the best one no doubt.But I think maybe you cut alittle too much. Little more of her legs should be in the photo but in global the photo is very good.

Hope to see more of your work in the future.
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Old Dec 8, 2005, 9:43 PM   #3
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I need to move to Cali :homey:Whew!
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Old Dec 8, 2005, 10:09 PM   #4
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I need to move to Cali :homey:Whew!
I'm not sure where Mohegan Lake is, but I was born and raised in New York and have found California a pretty nice place to be.
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Westchester county, ny

my middle brothers lives in long beach out in cali
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Old Dec 9, 2005, 2:19 AM   #6
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Love your use of DOF on the outside shots.
Good composition on 4.
Love the toning on 7.
Be careful where to cut, sometimes it's not bad to cut of limbs or fingers but on some pictures you have done it a bit too close (for example on 7).

Love to see more.

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Old Dec 9, 2005, 10:12 AM   #7
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Thanks Frank. I have found your photos very inspiring and am working towards a similar level of quality.

You can see all my galleries here: http://imageevent.com/24peter
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quick though on number 2, clone out that tag on her shirt. It draws attention. thought it was a bug at first. All else is great.
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