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Old Aug 31, 2006, 2:05 PM   #1
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MUA: Gerda
Models : Dennis and Ilona
Photographer : Frank Doorhof



For the time being my last post, have spammed a little bit too much
Now first a few days free time.
EDIT: Not my LAST post, but I have posted a little bit much this week, so now first a few days free.



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Old Aug 31, 2006, 10:00 PM   #2
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Great shots...I wonder what #5 would look like with some rain in it, say some water sprinkling down on them and running down their faces?
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Old Aug 31, 2006, 10:32 PM   #3
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You are having too much fun Frank......I wish I had your skills (and the studio would be fun too)!
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Old Aug 31, 2006, 10:46 PM   #4
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Hello Frank,

I love number 3.

Kalypso you are right.. I ask forgiveness... ..

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Old Sep 1, 2006, 3:58 AM   #5
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Thanks.
The problem with hands is they will always take some attention, but they in this case also make the shot, we experimented with a clinged together hands from Dennis but it did not come out as I wanted.

The idea was to emulate the Calvin Klein look, not to provoke erotic.
So that's why we did not went that extra bit, which would make the pictures for me too much.

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Old Sep 1, 2006, 8:12 AM   #6
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I don't do people shots but more into landscape stuff. I am however compelled to comment on your photo shoot. I have watched and admired your stuff for a long time. These comments are from both me and Captain Morgan spice rum *S* so forgive us!!!!. Therefore, these comments are about MY point of view and not necessarily a professionals.

#1 Her hand is distracting, otherwise a great shot.

#2 This is a nice shot but I believe that his hand would be over one of her breast as opposed to on her midrift.

#3 By far the most honest show/depiction of passion of the shoot. This is what you are trying to capture and you did it well!!!!!!!

#4 This is ok but not provoking.

#5 A great shot.. the reflections on her fingernails tend to draw your attention there but good passion here.

#6 This shot looks contrived. A woman does not lean her head back in exctasy when you nibble her jaw... He should be on her neck and it would be more honest.

#7 I don't know about others but a hand on her hip has never evoked the response I was looking for. I think he should be holding her buttocks and pulling her into him so she can feel his excitement. This, to me, is what you are trying to convey to the viewer. PASSION

These are my humble opinions but they are mine and I just wanted to be honest with you.

Bill

We have a seperate Forum specifically for Critiques, & I didn't see where Frank asked for one here....
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Old Sep 1, 2006, 2:43 PM   #7
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#1 and #3 are



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