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ZAKD Jan 29, 2006 4:22 AM

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Trying to improvephoto from last year since the orignal color are not good I think.

Here is one try but really wandering have I went to far with conversion.

Any other suggestion for making this photogood for printing is more than welcome............

Zak

ZAKD Jan 29, 2006 4:24 AM

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KENNETHD Jan 29, 2006 6:45 AM

Great detail (as in very nice improvement) in the faces...my only preference would be to see a bit more contrast between the edge of the clothing and white background. As is tho, it is very striking, and has lots of appeal.

Kd

rjseeney Jan 29, 2006 8:47 AM

you may want to try posting this in the extreme makeover section.:cool:

Reanimator Jan 29, 2006 10:29 AM

my input/advice/suggestion.......remove the chair and maybe the cartoon figure on the shirt.......i like the white clothes and white backgound......and maybe sharpen faces a bit

deffo a better pic in black and white !

In search of Syd Jan 29, 2006 10:33 AM

This is a nice double portrait in black and white. I agree the motif has to go. Cute maybe but is does distract a bit. It seems a bit on the sharp side too but that could be my monitor.

Regards,

Syd

ZAKD Jan 29, 2006 11:50 AM

Thanks for reply everyone I really appriciate.

I was thinking of removing the chair by mayself but waiting for your confirmation.

Considering the cartoon figure....ahh..Ok let start with that but I will loose some time on that...:O

Improvement of the cloth's edges will be speciall treatment...ahhhh again more time on computer...:mad:

Thanks to God that I do not have to do anything on the faces.... that would be....mama mia :sad:

Regards Zak

Hards80 Jan 29, 2006 12:14 PM

i agree with many of the comments made.. the black and white is definately an improvement, but you need to lose the cartoon and chair, the shirt contrast would work too, otherwise she just flows into the background...

squirl033 Jan 29, 2006 5:49 PM

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i would recommend a much tighter crop, and perhaps not so much noise reduction. the B&W format works well, but the faces look plastic, unnaturally smooth... maybe something more like this?


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