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dagodoy Jul 3, 2006 7:00 PM

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I'm beginning to take pictures with my Canon A620. please if you have some messages or ideas or corrections to do, please tell me.

style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #000000"Thisone is from a musician playing the flute

Regards,

Daniel Godoy

blr Jul 4, 2006 4:39 AM

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Nice photo and the BW works very well too. It's a bit too dark. Here is a the image after a quick correction in PS

kenmck15 Jul 4, 2006 6:00 AM

very cool retro image. Corrected image looks very good.

ken

dagodoy Jul 4, 2006 8:43 AM

Yeah, it looks very well. Thanks for that idea! I'll post a new pict soon...

oBSidian Jul 4, 2006 8:59 AM

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I like the shot - it has a real smoky jazz club feel to it, and wouldn't look at all out of place hung on the wall of a jazz club. The composition means that the flute dominates the scene, over and above the player's face. Maybe a slightly different angle to show more of the face would have been good - but then you lose the leading line of the flute.

The thing that bothered me most was the highlights on the flute from the camera's flash drew even more attention away from the player. As such I had a quick play with the clone stamp tool, along with a bit of a play with shadow/highlight in CS2.

Best,

-Ben



dagodoy Jul 4, 2006 10:27 AM

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Hi. I didn't know that this picture was so deep!, anyway, the correction is beter than original.

Ok, I've tried to take pictures that make feel something, this is the result of taking hundreds of pictures, I'm not professional, just a simple amateur...



dagodoy Jul 6, 2006 9:14 PM

This is a new picture

dagodoy Jul 6, 2006 9:16 PM

Sorry, here is again...


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