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Sep 27, 2005, 8:34 PM
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getting better, not quite there yet in my opinion. i really like your use of color and the ethereal/moody feeling of the image. i think that a tighter crop from the left might be good, maybe almost to the last tree(?) . something still too busy in that area for me. it's looking good though, i admire your creativity and talent.
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Sep 27, 2005, 11:51 PM
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i rather like this shot.. i wish though you'd left a little more space on the right and a little less on the left to get your girl on the right 1/3 vertical.. but still, its a very original and interesting shot..
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Sep 28, 2005, 3:31 AM
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This is a very creative shot! I also like the ghostly girl image on the left hand side but I think it needs to stand out a bit more where it's a little too transparent. Since the ghostly image is not well defined, it gives the feeling of almost empty busy-ness. I hope I'm making some sense...clear like mud, eh? :roll:
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Sep 28, 2005, 4:05 PM
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thank you all for your critiqs...
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