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Nov 12, 2005, 7:34 PM
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i welcome your comments.
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Nov 12, 2005, 7:42 PM
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Well I looked over it a couple of times and the shot leaves me wanting to see more. I think a boost in the purple saturation might help with giving it more color and contrast but the crop does not seem to work for me. I think because the point of attention seems to be the inside of the flower, which has no real detail or interest. I would try shooting wider and at a different angle.
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Nov 12, 2005, 11:15 PM
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here is a different angle...
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Nov 13, 2005, 12:09 AM
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i prefer the 2nd image.. but the inside of the flower does not balance well with the rest of the shot.. i think if you would have shot at an angle so we didnt have to see down into the flower it would look better...
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Nov 13, 2005, 12:26 AM
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we have one of those too...
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Nov 13, 2005, 6:20 AM
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The last is much better.
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Nov 13, 2005, 1:16 PM
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i prefer the composition of the last one.. just a couple things..
watch your exposure, you lost some detail in the whites.. decrease by about 1/3-1/2 and clone out the spot on the bottom right, the greenish area... takes away from the smooth appeal of the rest of the shot.. ============= dustin www.hardwickphotos.com |
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