The day draws even more to a close

[frenchy]

I know the sharpness isn't quite there in the tree but on this one I think the building to the left works as a point of interest here, whereas it would definitely be better without it in the previous picture I posted.

Any critiques / suggestions?

Thanks

[frenchy]

Woah the saturation seems more extreme on the web than in photoshop. Here's a reduced one.

[squirl033]

i like the first one better, even with the greater saturation. as for the building, it would actually look better to me without it entirely. that's just my opinion, though...

[VAtechtigger]

I second the no building vote. It not an interesting enough outline to be of interest in
silhouette form.

[Luxowell]

I love the heavy saturation in the first, but the sun is just too washed around the edges... maybe if you could blend the two you'd get a better result.