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ZAKD · Sep 15, 2005, 10:35 AM

The advertizing materijal that I made for my friend is finshed now.

I'm showing in order to have a serious reply which will help me for another possible work.

please give all of your comments, critigues or suggestions. Specially I mean about the color, saturation or exposure...

Regards ZAK

ZAKD · Sep 18, 2005, 4:33 AM

Surprice no comments???????

anyone...

SemperPix · Sep 18, 2005, 10:53 AM

you might want to play with your typography, i.e. alignment of text, font (serif) ,color, size... anyway, get rid of that flare effect (not appropriate).

Hards80 · Sep 18, 2005, 11:50 AM

i agree... lose the flare effect in the middle of the shot..

i think maybe shooting from a lower angle would emphasize the subject more as well.. right now you are shooting down at the coffee, so next time shoot from the same level as your subject...

creeduk · Sep 18, 2005, 6:19 PM

Yes I agree again, no flare in the middle it really does not fit. I think less font changes as well.

ZAKD · Sep 20, 2005, 9:54 AM

First thanks for reply.

It was a little hard decission puting the lans fare in behind but I needed something to fulfill the background for which I did not had any idea in that time and also I put it togive additinal lights on coffe which was a little dark.

Shooting above was neccesary in order to give a special look to the cup with the coffe in it and to make a little smoke from the cup in order to show a life from the cup-coffe.

About the fonts I dont know what to say. Maybe it should be smaller but if this a Bilboard - 3x4meters I wanted to be seen from a distance.

But I'm preparing the another side of the bilboard and I even find a model so tonight I will show the better choice...at least I think so

Regards Zak

Tempo · Sep 20, 2005, 12:33 PM

The inner part of the cup is dirty. It's from where the coffee had splashed when it was being set up. It is noticeable from examination at this size but if it was any bigger, especially poster size it will be easily seen. It's just a matter of cloning it out though, so it's no biggy.

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ZAKD Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 962	The advertizing materijal that I made for my friend is finshed now. I'm showing in order to have a serious reply which will help me for another possible work. please give all of your comments, critigues or suggestions. Specially I mean about the color, saturation or exposure... Regards ZAK Attached Images

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Sep 18, 2005, 4:33 AM	#2
ZAKD Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 962	Surprice no comments??????? anyone...

Sep 18, 2005, 10:53 AM	#3
SemperPix Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 2	you might want to play with your typography, i.e. alignment of text, font (serif) ,color, size... anyway, get rid of that flare effect (not appropriate).

Sep 18, 2005, 11:50 AM	#4
Hards80 Super Moderator Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Cleveland, OH Posts: 9,046	i agree... lose the flare effect in the middle of the shot.. i think maybe shooting from a lower angle would emphasize the subject more as well.. right now you are shooting down at the coffee, so next time shoot from the same level as your subject...

Sep 18, 2005, 6:19 PM	#5
creeduk Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 365	Yes I agree again, no flare in the middle it really does not fit. I think less font changes as well.

Sep 20, 2005, 9:54 AM	#6
ZAKD Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 962	First thanks for reply. It was a little hard decission puting the lans fare in behind but I needed something to fulfill the background for which I did not had any idea in that time and also I put it togive additinal lights on coffe which was a little dark. Shooting above was neccesary in order to give a special look to the cup with the coffe in it and to make a little smoke from the cup in order to show a life from the cup-coffe. About the fonts I dont know what to say. Maybe it should be smaller but if this a Bilboard - 3x4meters I wanted to be seen from a distance. But I'm preparing the another side of the bilboard and I even find a model so tonight I will show the better choice...at least I think so Regards Zak

Sep 20, 2005, 12:33 PM	#7
Tempo Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 20	The inner part of the cup is dirty. It's from where the coffee had splashed when it was being set up. It is noticeable from examination at this size but if it was any bigger, especially poster size it will be easily seen. It's just a matter of cloning it out though, so it's no biggy.