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Hi All,
I'm not usually brave enough to post in here, but just wanted to get some thoughts as I have not tried abstract before. What do you think? Mark. |
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hi mark welcome, we don't bite mind iam new myself, i can't really comment i never know what to say about these shots but iam sure someone will.
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Hmmm Not so sure this is abstract but I definitely like the composition and DOF on this . Nice Shot.
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Interesting angle and framing, coupled with good depth of field control and contrast-creating lighting.
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nice side lighting and good textures. the foreground cog at the top of the frame is quite prominent and oof, which is almost distracting. maybe crop a bit of that out?
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I kinda like the oof part on the top than it goes to focus than the DOF out of focus shall we say kinda gives it a nice look. But maybe crop it and post with out the top part just to see. But I like it as I see it.
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Not a bad shot conceptually, two things however....
one. make this a BW shot with contrast kicked up very high. two. You should have shot this with maximum depth of field possible, the eye automatically travels left, where i think your shot could have been more ballanced and interesing. good first try hooli |
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Thanks all - I haved looked at suggestions and here are the results.
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