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mad_grll Sep 27, 2005 7:49 AM

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it's a first try...I wan't to go further on this kind of composition...

Widowmaker Sep 27, 2005 9:33 AM

I like the idea but have mixed opinions about it. Overall it seems a bit busy to me. Im guessing you are wanting to show different poses or emotions in one picture. I think the pose on the right compared to the other two work in that sense but the two poses on the left seem to close together and too similar.

Hards80 Sep 27, 2005 9:48 AM

i think you could do without the middle pose... it kind of distracts me that the left two poses are tranlucent..

actually just the pose on the right i think would work...

but i think the creativity is top notch on this shot.. the processing looks very ethereal and dreamy, which i really like.. i just think you need to cut down on some elements..

julies517 Sep 27, 2005 10:04 AM

wow, i love the concept of this. i have to agree with the above opinions that it's a little busy. mostly that the two images on the left are too close together(?). keep working with it, when everything falls into place this will be a compelling image.

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