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These were shot with studio strobes and a phototek black background, I did not add the water drops there were there after I picked the flowers after it finished raining.
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i think the problem here is the cropping.. its a bit too tight i think.. and you may tone down a few of the highlights just a bit and play with the colors, something about the colors just doesn't look right..
its a good first attempt though.. keep up the hard work... ----------- dustin www.hardwickphotos.com |
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i agree with dustin about the color and highlights. i like the composition, i don't think it's too tight but lacks a certain richness, maybe play a little more and repost? not a bad effort though
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Looks a bit hot on the left side of the picture. Should be green I believe or at least light green.
The flowers themselves look good but that left side takes away from this shot being very good, if not excellent. |
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