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PHOTO-PRO · Nov 21, 2005, 9:31 PM

These were shot with studio strobes and a phototek black background, I did not add the water drops there were there after I picked the flowers after it finished raining.

Hards80 · Nov 22, 2005, 11:36 AM

i think the problem here is the cropping.. its a bit too tight i think.. and you may tone down a few of the highlights just a bit and play with the colors, something about the colors just doesn't look right..

its a good first attempt though.. keep up the hard work...

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dustin

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julies517 · Nov 22, 2005, 8:31 PM

i agree with dustin about the color and highlights. i like the composition, i don't think it's too tight but lacks a certain richness, maybe play a little more and repost? not a bad effort though

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vIZnquest · Nov 22, 2005, 8:35 PM

Looks a bit hot on the left side of the picture. Should be green I believe or at least light green.

The flowers themselves look good but that left side takes away from this shot being very good, if not excellent.

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Nov 22, 2005, 11:36 AM	#2
Hards80 Super Moderator Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Cleveland, OH Posts: 9,046	i think the problem here is the cropping.. its a bit too tight i think.. and you may tone down a few of the highlights just a bit and play with the colors, something about the colors just doesn't look right.. its a good first attempt though.. keep up the hard work... ----------- dustin www.hardwickphotos.com

Nov 22, 2005, 8:31 PM	#3
julies517 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 851	i agree with dustin about the color and highlights. i like the composition, i don't think it's too tight but lacks a certain richness, maybe play a little more and repost? not a bad effort though .

Nov 22, 2005, 8:35 PM	#4
vIZnquest Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 2,974	Looks a bit hot on the left side of the picture. Should be green I believe or at least light green. The flowers themselves look good but that left side takes away from this shot being very good, if not excellent.